​Please review the Abstract and Conclusion and fix the grammar errors and contextual agreement, writing homework help

Please review the Abstract and Conclusion and fix the grammar errors and contextual agreement.

**Add Policy recommendation ( add 2 more paragraphs in the end) and please follow up the instructions

Instructions for Abstract and Conclusion

Researchers: Direction and Rubric for Materials/Methods and Results

Main topic;Industry influence on Dietary Guidelines and other Food Safety Net Programs

Role: Medical Researcher

Disease relative with the topic: Cardiovascular Disease

The purpose of the materials and methods section is to explain your research in such detail that it could be repeated by another group of scientists and their results would be identical to yours. The results are a detailed summary of your data that was collected during the experiment. These sections in all scholarly papers are written in paragraph form and do not include any bullet point lists. It is also written in the past tense and formally. There will be less in text citations in this section in comparison to the lit review and the conclusion but they are NOT optional. If you are using someone else’s idea or information that is not common knowledge you MUST cite the source. These sections do not include background information. If you find yourself writing about anything other than materials and methods used it need to go in either you lit review or conclusion. It is purely the recipe of the research paper.

First you must identify

Independent variable (there will only be one)

Dependent variables (you will need 2 at least)

Variables you will control for

Control Group

Experimental group

Materials

Includes a comprehensive list of all the materials needed for the experiment including

The number of subjects and the inclusion criteria

Units of measurement

Methods

Includes a step by step details account of the techniques used to collect data written in the past tense

Justifies the use of each technique used to collect valid data

Results

For this assignment 2 visual aids that illustrate your data collected are required

The visuals must be relevant to your research and must be created through your hypothetical study (you can’t use someone else’s data)

Chart, tables or graphs are acceptable and must include

A title

Labeled x and y axis

Correct units of measurement

Logical choice of measurement and units

After each visual a description of each follows. The description details the chart so that someone could recreate the chart without seeing it.

Examples of how to start this section

To investigate the correlation between

To confirm the presence of

To identify the cause of

I uploaded a Materials/Methods and Results example work, this example can help you to you have an idea of the work you need to do. Also I uploaded the Annotated bibliography that I did for this Topic of Cardiovascular Disease.